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PostPosted: Saturday February 25, 2017 7:47:34    Post subject:  Reply with quote

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PostPosted: Saturday February 25, 2017 7:55:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

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PostPosted: Thursday March 30, 2017 3:26:54    Post subject: Reply with quote

I have now created the first video in my anime analysis/talking about anime series, featuring light spoilers about Demi-chan wa Kataritai (or Interviews with Monster Girls).

I don't expect to get any attention for the first 10+ videos, but maybe you guys will enjoy the videos in the meantime. I'm having fun making them and I'm steadily improving.

Enjoy:


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PostPosted: Friday March 31, 2017 8:44:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

That's some professional shit, Cros. I also just realized I never got back to you with that email, I'm sorry about that.

From listening to this, your script was good and the clarity you recorded in was top notch. The pronunciation seems fine too, although since I'm no weeb, I wouldn't know if it was good or bad. I just think it sounds the way it should, haha.

I don't know what I was expecting, but this definitely came across as the real deal in how it was produced and recorded. Also, as a viewer, I appreciate you editing the background video to match what you're talking about -- I hate when people leave a still image or slideshow as opposed to actual scenes from the show or movie in question.

The music was a nice touch, it doesn't overpower your narration but also acts as a good melody while listening to your words.
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PostPosted: Friday March 31, 2017 11:13:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

Wow, that was a lot more positive than I was expecting. I'm glad you enjoyed it, considering the subject matter not being in your particular tastes.

If you don't mind, what would you consider the weakest part of the video? I would say I might have made the volume in my voice too loud for default and that I need to get better at speaking in a more interesting manner.
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PostPosted: Saturday April 01, 2017 7:28:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

Damn Cros, I'm not going to hate on you for no reason lol. This is a serious thing you're attempting and I wanted to give real feedback. I can put aside the differences in subject matter for something like this.

As for the weakest part... I'm not sure I can honestly pinpoint something that I had issue with that would help you in any way. You say your voice was louder than it should have been, well I listened with headphones in and it seemed pretty level to me. Perhaps you can test it out, but where it is, wasn't a problem for me.

Maybe add more editing to the format going forward, but I also really like the simplistic narration over clips system you have going on. I don't know, sometimes others like to break up the clips with an index of sorts that quickly highlights what you're saying. So a transition to a new point would have said point on the screen before transitioning into the clips. Something akin to that, perhaps?
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PostPosted: Saturday April 01, 2017 8:22:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeah, I've seen some other people do that in their videos, but I'm not sure it'd work with what I'm doing. I can test it out and see, though.

Also, I just finished another video, but this time I felt the OP and ED either overpowered the audio or were too distracting to follow my points, so I just kept it silent.

I'll post it here if you feel like giving the first few minutes a listen, and I'll link you to the Op and ED if you want to test it at various volumes in another window while watching mine.

Of course, this is all if you want to. I'm sure I can convince Grub or Dec to do it instead if you don't feel like it or I can just go with my gut.

Either way, thank you for your feedback. It's really helpful and I'm glad you took the time.

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PostPosted: Saturday April 01, 2017 22:57:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

Here's the next video: Youjo Senki (or The Saga of Tanya the Evil) and the Dichotomy of Cute Killing. The video has spoilers for the second episode "twist" that's featured in the synopsis for the anime and minor spoilers for the series as a whole.



I went without music this time because of the visual editing I put into this one along with the OP and ED both being too distracting regardless of volume. If you'd like to see what it's like with the OP or ED, you can find those here:

OP:
Spoiler:



ED:
Spoiler:



I'm also open to suggestions for what video to do next, though I will be deciding before the day is up, because I have a schedule I'd like to keep up to commit myself to it.
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PostPosted: Sunday April 02, 2017 8:52:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

I'll give this a watch tomorrow possibly and get back to you with my thoughts.
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PostPosted: Sunday April 02, 2017 8:58:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

You don't need to watch the whole thing if you're not interested in it. Also, Levy helped me with determining the music conundrum, so that's no longer an issue, either.

If you feel like doing it of your own free will rather than just because I asked, I'd still love your feedback, though.
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PostPosted: Sunday April 02, 2017 9:03:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

It's not the lack of interest, it's just late right now.
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PostPosted: Sunday April 02, 2017 9:43:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

I didn't mean to suggest a rush of you. I just meant you don't have to do anything just because I asked.
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PostPosted: Saturday April 08, 2017 8:17:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

Third video! Mild spoilers for he show, but since it's slice of life there's not much to spoil:


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PostPosted: Monday April 17, 2017 19:14:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

Here's the next video, this time about Konosuba season 1. There are minor spoilers for the show in general, but most of the focus is on the first few episodes. It's much shorter since I started late, but I tried to make the editing funnier as a way to make up for it. Let me know what you think!




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